Still on my novella gist…
You can’t blame me for being excited. The comments I have gotten really got me grinning like a Chesire cat. I am so happy that people really loved my first novella. It means so much.
I sincerely appreciate all those who have taken their time to read my novella and I love those who took their time to send me a kudos.
So, let me gist you…
I got a thumbs up/critic/ review from this boss lady who also happens to a published writer. She is the author of THE HOUSEMAID, just ask your siblings in JSS 3 or Basic 9 (Oyo State Schools) like they call it now, they will tell you all about the novel. This boss lady is- Ebere Ezike.
Here is her review(I am keeping the criticisms to myself)
“Wow, wow, wow….What a nice job you did. This is beautiful. Eku ise!
The suspense went through; even at, the end I was still looking for another page.
I love the fact that the guy (Brian) was able to reconcile his differences with his sister and through that got the help he was looking for.
I also loved the fact that the devil they were looking for was not the real devil😈. Thank you for also noting that such (what they discovered) was beyond their jurisdiction.
Then the romance is cool…
So, to Characters:
*Brian:* Nice guy. I love the way you painted him as imperfect.
*Van:* Cool personality. That somersault something was bae! Smart and intelligent. And how she brought about a truce was nice…though, you sort of tilted me towards her than Brian.
*Sunny:* The surprise springer! She is the real heroine. Weak but strong. We never got to know her age though, but I presume she should be in her teens and yes, ‘she be correct hacker o’…Four computers, what the hell! Stealth mode😂
*Madam Faulkner:* Perfect traditional mother
*Mr Faulkner:* Though I never knew you, God bless your soul. You trained Sunny well
Also, the fact that Brian’s identity was let out in a creative manner was nice.
Your use of humour was also beautiful. For instance, where Sunny said she was better than one bad hacker and Van was praising her, Brian’s reply was epic😂”
So what do you think? You have to read my novella if you have not. Open the pages and get immersed into the Cyber world.
Download here or ask me to send you a copy free of charge(I am nice like that)